Thank you so much for the feedback. Yeah, I pretty much agree with your entire comment. When I was writing, I didn't think Loukas would get a "happy" ending. I was going for more bittersweet - but a lot of people feel like I went heavier on the bitter than the sweet. Maybe someday I'll go back and rework it.
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Date: 2013-06-28 03:45 pm (UTC)Thanks again for commenting!