Behind the High Walls

I really loved your world building, the plot, the characters - your story still has admirers when we stumble upon it. I agree with the other reviewers that you have missed out some of the steps Loukas goes through in changing his views and his emotional reactions. If he does not love Iereus in that deep romantic way then his other thought processes need more definition. But as your first big fiction it holds up well. Thanks for writing it!